Saturday, 21 February 2009

A cup of tea in Madhepura


Today I saw a man,
sitting next to me,
I was having tea,
so too he.

Just a thick dark skin,
between atmosphere and him,
hollow eyes and naked feet crackin’,

don’t know the surface sad or smilin’.

Beside him me a triple chin,
shrinking fatter while he grows thin,
him me and me him shall I pity him,
or rather me myself my frien’.

For armpit

5 comments:

Zankhana Sha said...

vaah mere deshi dyllaan bhai

Bend said...

cool, now I can give myself a name too - "Desi Dillan"

Anonymous said...

As we discussed earlier " desi baab dillon"...LOL...
do u think we can fit drums in this???? if we can...it would be fun....

Bend said...

got even better one -
desi baap dillhon
heh heh

Anonymous said...

uff the mattfinis simplicity of "today i saw a man"!!..could be released in a 'songs to bring up your children with' anthology..
bhai bhakunee sa
ju hub delighted jet agane..i implore you to more your words to tune..aapki awaz main bloo ki bharmaar hai.Sach
I can almost urget you to polish the rythem but i almost dont want to suggest anything that changes the form of your composition too much..alas the net in my ofice is thirdworld..so i guess i missed the little motion picture?..just stared at the chai still!