Today I saw a man,
sitting next to me,
I was having tea,
so too he.
Just a thick dark skin,
between atmosphere and him,
hollow eyes and naked feet crackin’,
don’t know the surface sad or smilin’.
Beside him me a triple chin,
shrinking fatter while he grows thin,
him me and me him shall I pity him,
or rather me myself my frien’.
For armpit
5 comments:
vaah mere deshi dyllaan bhai
cool, now I can give myself a name too - "Desi Dillan"
As we discussed earlier " desi baab dillon"...LOL...
do u think we can fit drums in this???? if we can...it would be fun....
got even better one -
desi baap dillhon
heh heh
uff the mattfinis simplicity of "today i saw a man"!!..could be released in a 'songs to bring up your children with' anthology..
bhai bhakunee sa
ju hub delighted jet agane..i implore you to more your words to tune..aapki awaz main bloo ki bharmaar hai.Sach
I can almost urget you to polish the rythem but i almost dont want to suggest anything that changes the form of your composition too much..alas the net in my ofice is thirdworld..so i guess i missed the little motion picture?..just stared at the chai still!
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